Murdered!
Sorry for the lack of posts. Does anybody even look at this blog anymore? Well, here's my new dialogue anyway. Early rough blocking. Take a look. Comments and critiques are always appreciated. Have a great day!
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posted by Rick Blankenship at 6/01/2007 12:17:00 PM
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sup bud!
i think the staging could use a little work.. the camera angle doesnt really give the power to either (living) character... it might be cool to switch the camera to just over the seated guy's shoulder looking up at the guy yelling at him...
diggin the blocking man..
the gesture on "what you thought" might work better with his other arm.. you could lose the gesture on "but i know what you've done!" and gesture to the dead body on " YOU'VE MURDERED!"..
love how he moves back to the first guy on "you never could"
keep on rockin it!
Thanks for taking a look Matt! Great idea on the camera angle. I'll definitely change that up.
You know, I had him doing the "what you thought" gesture with his other arm at first, I even did my reference with the other arm for it. I changed it though... I think the silhouette was bothering me because his head was hiding his hand. Maybe with the camera tweak I can make it work.
-RAB
i liked it but the murderer had no reaction he just sat there smoking
Thanks Milo. Yeah, the guy sitting is pretty nonchalant about killing the other guy. I haven't worked on him much at all...... even his smoking will be totally redone, but he will give a subtle swallow and blink his eyes a couple times when he's accused.
yo shit fresh son
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